Beach (Haiku challenge Day 8)


The soft summer waves,
caressing my senses-
As I take a walk

Waves meeting the shore,
gently rise and collapse,
as i walk past by !

Written as a part of haiku challenge


6 comments:

  1. So peaceful, I want to get a tan. Lovely.

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  2. well written, I guess we both got almost similar type of Haiku for this :)
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  3. Great imagery created, and anyone by the seashore will love this rhythm.

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  4. well written Haiku RaNii.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special

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  5. wonderful one varsha..both of them..
    u seem to get more profound with each coming one..liked it a lot :)

    sarah

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