Beach (Haiku challenge Day 8)


The soft summer waves,
caressing my senses-
As I take a walk

Waves meeting the shore,
gently rise and collapse,
as i walk past by !

Written as a part of haiku challenge


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  1. Mike and Sandy PatrickFebruary 8, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    So peaceful, I want to get a tan. Lovely.

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  2. Nabeel NoorullahFebruary 8, 2011 at 2:07 PM

    well written, I guess we both got almost similar type of Haiku for this :)
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  3. NankaFebruary 8, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    Great imagery created, and anyone by the seashore will love this rhythm.

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  4. RaNiiiiiiFebruary 8, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    thanks everyone !

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  5. Someone is SpecialFebruary 8, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    well written Haiku RaNii.. Loved it..

    Someone is Special

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  6. Sarah malikFebruary 9, 2011 at 12:20 AM

    wonderful one varsha..both of them..
    u seem to get more profound with each coming one..liked it a lot :)

    sarah

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