Abandoned boat (Haiku challenge day 18)



Tossing on the shores,
the abandoned boat of dreams
waiting for a ride

Written as a part of Haiku challenge - Day 18

8 comments:

  1. Waiting for the perfect day, and it appeared.
    Mike Patrick
    http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/

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  2. Very nice. The dream is just waiting for someone to take it for a ride. What a great image.

    Shalom,
    http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/18/ninevah/

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  3. Tossing along I love that. Very tight Haiku

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  4. Loved it RaNi... Awesome..

    Someone is Special

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  5. "the abandoned boat of dreams"...
    Very well thought :)

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  6. wow thanks everyone.. i m getting good encouragement !

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