Abandoned boat (Haiku challenge day 18)



Tossing on the shores,
the abandoned boat of dreams
waiting for a ride

Written as a part of Haiku challenge - Day 18
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8 comments:

  1. Uma AnandaneFebruary 18, 2011 at 7:23 AM

    Lovely haiku!

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  2. Mike and Sandy PatrickFebruary 18, 2011 at 2:32 PM

    Waiting for the perfect day, and it appeared.
    Mike Patrick
    http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/

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  3. Cloaked MonkFebruary 18, 2011 at 2:55 PM

    Very nice. The dream is just waiting for someone to take it for a ride. What a great image.

    Shalom,
    http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/18/ninevah/

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  4. RaNiiiiiiFebruary 19, 2011 at 6:02 AM

    Thank you !!

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  5. Kristen HaskellFebruary 19, 2011 at 6:26 AM

    Tossing along I love that. Very tight Haiku

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  6. Someone is SpecialFebruary 19, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    Loved it RaNi... Awesome..

    Someone is Special

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  7. eyeographyFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:02 AM

    "the abandoned boat of dreams"...
    Very well thought :)

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  8. RaNiiiiiiFebruary 20, 2011 at 5:56 AM

    wow thanks everyone.. i m getting good encouragement !

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