L for lonely

Lonely are my nights,
Lonely are my days,
Lonely are the years, that bring me tears

Lonely are the thoughts that come in vain,
Lonely are the moments that give me pain,
Lonely I am, in lot many ways!

Lonely is the land on which I walk,
Lonely is the beach where I stroll,
Let death take this lonely life on its toll

P.S. This post is written as a part of Leo's Z-A writing challenge for the month of November.. for other posts visit this link


  1. Even I'm lonely but I don't want death's company. Be optimistic! :)

  2. Awww...The mood is captured very well through your rhyme :)

  3. Such a sad post !! hope you are doing much better in real :)


  4. We are all lonely little beings, Varsha.. and that's what keep us all together.. Ironic, isn't it?! :)

    So, here's one from me to you... changing a letter and a few words from your poem:
    Lovely are my nights,
    Lovely are my days,
    Lovely are the years, that alleviate my tears

    Lovely are the thoughts that flit in vain,
    Lovely are the moments that soothe my pain,
    Lovely I am, in lot many ways!

    Lovely is the land on which I walk,
    Lovely is the beach where I stroll,
    Let death be taken by this lovely life on a toll

    Have a LOVELY week ahead!! xoxoxo
    My blog is here: http://kavisionz.wordpress.com
    But I have to use my Google Account to post a comment here.. so please don't be misled :)

  5. sorry for writing such a sad post.. this was just a phase in my life where i felt this.. though i m okay now.. thanks for the concern

  6. in the end, we are alone after all.. but nothing to be sad of.. that phase is yet to come.. take strength from your positives and move on fast :) lovely words...

  7. are you sad really? thank God, just a phase na...cheer up girl...life is so beautiful to feel lonely dear... :-)

    lovely poem on loneliness... ;-)


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