Haiku challenge Day # 14

It's love at first sight
the whole universe crashed down
I'm floating above!


And a sad one:

with the loss of love
comes unhappiness and grief
no scope of return




8 comments:

  1. With love all things are possible!
    The loss of love must be unbearable,
    like turning out the lights.
    Happy Valentines Day!

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  2. At least you managed to stay above the mess when the universe crashed!


    Who Can Love the Frost?

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  3. This for sure a wonderful set of haiku (well balanced) an on the theme of today.

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  4. thank you.. haha tht's how we feel when we experience love at first sight..

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  5. Love at first sight......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful feeling and you have penned wonderfully!

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  6. When one falls at first sight -- the world shakes upside down!

    Although I am late getting around today, Happy Valentine's Day!

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