It's love at first sight
the whole universe crashed down
I'm floating above!
And a sad one:
with the loss of love
comes unhappiness and grief
no scope of return
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 14 – February 14th – Theme or Word: Love or Valentine
Loved both of them.....Nice haiku :)
ReplyDeleteWith love all things are possible!
ReplyDeleteThe loss of love must be unbearable,
like turning out the lights.
Happy Valentines Day!
At least you managed to stay above the mess when the universe crashed!
ReplyDeleteWho Can Love the Frost?
This for sure a wonderful set of haiku (well balanced) an on the theme of today.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE the first one! :) <3
ReplyDeletethank you.. haha tht's how we feel when we experience love at first sight..
ReplyDeleteLove at first sight......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful feeling and you have penned wonderfully!
ReplyDeleteWhen one falls at first sight -- the world shakes upside down!
ReplyDeleteAlthough I am late getting around today, Happy Valentine's Day!